bird song

were our love the giant
of childhood fairy tales
its soul encased in a bird
and that bird would be a song
as long as it rung
in my ears
would our love survive
as long as it danced
would i be trapped
and never seek
to flee
from this circle love
and the day it dies
would we


  1. At the risk of sounding illiterate, lemme ask who wrote this one?

    Last line was hard to think and digest. Cuts like a knife, eh?
    Heretic | 11.07.06 - 12:58 am | #

  2. phatichar, thank you :)

    heretic, yes i know the end is a bit tacky! who wrote it? matlab?